meh...
Better synths and a better bass. Just some of it doesn't feel like professional. Now don't get me wrong, its an OK song, but really not front page worthy.... It just doesn't have enough sample layers... around 2:40, it would be nice to have a single note playing in the background to have a nice ambiance to it. But overall, the song is a little too bland, It was kind of boring to listen to. Just keep trying, and you will get better.